Please, help me guys. "Error Analysis" Please, help me. My lecture was given me this passage and asked me to find out the errors and to correct them. Actually, I have done it, but I am still confused

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Please, help me guys. "Error Analysis" Please, help me. My lecture was given me this passage and asked me to find out the errors and to correct them. Actually, I have done it, but I am still confused and I need your corrections and suggestions, guys. Thank you so much for your kindness then ^^ ABSTRACT Teaching speaking simple Descriptive using neighborhood walk in Junior High School-1 Jakarta Class VII. Focus of English language teaching has recently shifted to a concern with developing discourse skills, it means that the aim of English Language Teaching is now seen as anal ding learners to develop of knowledge and skills with allow them to end age with whole texts approve pirate to social context either oral or written. The writer write this simple Description using neighborhood walk in Junior High School-1 Jakarta, that teaching speaking to competence of English Language, also to conclude by the system of effective learning students, aimed and programmed, the time is enough and will have a diligent students. The result of learning English, is the students have ability to communication in English, oral or written. The other, the students can said ability if they can have the order from the speaker, that they listening or reading. There for the English Language is the two aim communication, so the students must ability give the descriptive of their thinking in written that can understood by the listener

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Please, help me guys. "Error Analysis"

Please, help me. My lecture was given me this passage and asked me to find out the errors and to correct them. Actually, I have done it, but I am still confused and I need your corrections and suggestions, guys. Thank you so much for your kindness then ^^

ABSTRACT

Teaching How to Describe things Orally using "neighborhood walk" in <em>Junior High School-1 Jakarta Class VII.</em>
The focus of English language teaching has recently shifted to a concern with developing discourse skills. It means that the aim of English language teaching is now seen as being too anal. Anal about learners to developing of knowledge and skills which allow them to end age each school year with an understanding of whole texts, which are approved for private and social context, either oral or written.
The writer writes this simple description using "neighborhood walk" in <em>Junior High School-1 Jakarta</em>. This way of teaching achieves speaking, to competence level in English. Language. In conclusion, by the system of effective learning, students, aimed focus of the students, and functionality of the programmed, the time is enough and will have a diligent students and within enough time, a hard working student will be the outcome.
The results from learning English, is that the students will have the ability to communicateion in English, oral or written. The other benefits are that, if the students have said ability, they can have understand the order from the speakers, that they are listening to or reading from.
There As for the English language, there is the two aim main focuses of communication, so the students must have the ability to give the descriptionve of what their they are thinking in writingten and also in speech that can understood by the any listener.