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My country Algeria
I'll give a short presentation to introduce my country Algeria.
i will start with a geographic presentation:
Algeria is a largest country in northern Africa, the distance north-south is 1800km , to the North the terain is limited by Algerian Atlas Mountains which distinct the country on two distinct area:
-the North: the Mediteranian Area where live the most of population.
-the South: the Sahara "sand deserts".
in my next post i'll put some informations about population, culture, tourism
2012年6月27日 10:42
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My country Algeria
I'll give a short presentation to introduce my country Algeria.i will start with a geographic presentation:
Algeria is a largest country in northern Africa, the distance north-south is 1800km , to the North the terain is limited by the Algerian Atlas Mountains which distinct the country on two distinct area:
-the North: the Mediteranian Area where most of the population lives.
-the South: the Sahara "sand deserts".
in my next post i'll put some informations about population, culture, tourism
2017年3月28日
Hello , I'm sorry if I'm intruding, but I found your paragraph about my country and I couldn't help but read it :) , for a start I really like it , it's a precise and consise kind of paragraph which is a good quality when writing a paragraph , and if you dont mind i would like to point out some small mistakes you've made which I make all the time but we all should learn from our mistakes right ? :)
You said '' Algeria is a largest " but we say " Algeria is the largest country " since with superlatives we use "the" because there is only one "algeria "
You repeated distinct two times , it's better to avoid repetitions for a better paragraph you can say for example ".... Algerian Atlas Mountains which divides the country into two distinct area
Keep up the hard work , and I wish you all the best :)
2017年3月27日
thank you Yusuf, you are too kind!!
2012年6月27日
that's great one, I like your introduction, actually remember something, in english we said : a short introduction, not presentation, this word can be used only in french language, "introduction = présentation" but in english "presentation" seems strange in english. Regards
2012年6月27日
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