First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I want to (wanna = colloqial) learn english. I can speak english, but i want to improve (ammend = change) my english. I am in the 9th grade at a grammar school in germany. I want to improve my english because one day I want to study and live in the USA.
I am from Germany and I live in Hamburg (Hamburg is a city in Germany, not a nearby city to Gerbany). I want to make friends from North America, espicially from the USA. I love the series Pretty Little Liars -- maybe you are a big fan from that series too, then you can contact me here. I watch it in english, but I don't understand everything; this is another reason too why I want to improve my english, I want understand everything that they are talking about. I read the book Pretty Little Liars, but it's really hard to understand it, because there are so many words I've never seen at school. But i look up the words.
I am a normal teenager from germany. :) And I am a guy (boy = very young).
Please contact me if you are from the USA, or love Pretty Little Liars.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I want to learn English. I can speak English, but i want to improve (amend only applies to improving things like government documents) my English. I am in the ninth grade at a grammar school in Germany. I want to improve my English, because one day i want to study and live in the USA.
I am from Germany and i live nearby Hamburg. I want to make friends from North America, especially from the USA. I love the series Pretty Little Liars. Maybe you are a big fan of that series too. Then you can contact me here. I watch it in English, but I don't understand everything. This is a reason too, why I want to improve my English. I want to understand everything that they are talking about. I read the book from Pretty Little Liars, but it's really hard to understand that, because there are so many words I've never had at school. But i look up the words.
I am a normal teenager from Germany. :) And i am a boy.
Please contact me, when you are from the USA or love Pretty Little Liars.

Good job! Just some little corrections.  Keep up the good work!