Melissa Boilini
That man does not deserve you!!! Relationships begin to hope, begin a new life with the man you love, there are no secrets because you finally have an accomplice, a friend, and have a love, and your soul is exposed to such person, seems to be the perfect man , the perfect relationship, everything fits in our lives ... But it also happens that many times those dreams are broken, and the disappointment comes because you do not value, and does not call you, or if it does it when he wants to and not when you need it ... and never is for you and you are wrapped in absolute sadness and helplessness of not knowing what to do. And it is right to feel angry, you have given everything, you have not been left with nothing, and suddenly everything is broken. Why let you trample? Many women experience this fact of being belittled, insulted by her partner, relationships where there is no respect, but saddest thing is that you allow this outrage, no one can or has the right to insult you, do not give in to them, do not let them in the name of love you to pieces you and your dignity. If anything I do not like, if it criticizes all of you, if you ridicule to others, if you shout over others, if not responding to your calls, or no-shows when the flames nteresado, by avoiding try not to encounter any serious issues, if you want to stop, if you no longer have details if always thinking only of your body, you have all these characteristics, then feel free to finish it, is having a better time to be with a person life, does not deserve, not valued, not like you, only serve to your tastes ... creative woman you love, you deserve a good love, good value, why not have all day to be supporting that hurt your heart. Do not let that make you mourn.
2012年10月25日 23:54
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poor woman
2013年3月2日

That man does not deserve you!!!

Relationships begin to with hope, begin and a new life with the man you love. There are no secrets because you finally have an accomplice a partner and a friend and have a to love. and Your soul is exposed to such person your partner, who seems to be the perfect man, in the perfect relationship, and everything fits in our lives.

But it also happens that many times those dreams are broken, and the disappointment comes because you do not feel valued. To often he does not call you, or if it does it is only when he wants to and not when you need it. He is never is there for you and you are wrapped in absolute sadness and helplessness of not knowing what to do.

And It is right (you may want to use "justified" or "OK") to feel angry because you have given everything you have not been and are left with nothing. Suddenly, everything is broken. Why did I let you trample me? Many women experience this fact of being belittled, insulted by their partner, relationships where there is no and not being respect, but saddest thing is that we allow this outrage. No one should or has the right to insult you, so do not give in to them. Do not let them, in the name of love, break you to pieces you and shred your dignity.

If anything there's something you do not like, if it criticizes all of something bothers you, if you ridicule and shout over to others  if you shout over others, if not responding you don't respond to your calls, or no-shows when the flames nteresado, no longer show interest by avoiding try not to encounter any discussing serious issues, then plaease tell me. If you want to stop, if you only think of yourself no longer have details if always thinking only of your bodyor you have all any these characteristics, then feel free please to finish end the relationship. It is having a better time to be with a person in life that feels they does not deserve you and feels valued by you, unlike you who is self seving. not like you, only serve to your tastes  Find a woman you'll love. As for women, you deserve a good love, good value, and don't deserve to have hurt in your heart. Do not let them hurt you.

 

These are my humble corrections! To be honest, I didn't follow exactly what you were saying toward the end, so I guessed as to what you might have been saying. One thing that confused me was that I didn't know who you were writing to. This is very important, I think. I didn't know if this note was addressed to women in general, the men that hurt women, or retelling a personal story. You seemed to mix all three. I would suggest picking to whom you're addressing, and use pronouns that address that audience. Also, watch for run on sentences. If you have any further questions, please let me know!

 

Also, you'd be surprised how many men feel the same way about women who undervalue and hurt them. Just saying!

2012年11月2日

That This man does not deserve you!!!

 

Relationships begin to with/in hope; to begin a new life with the man you love. There are no secrets because you finally have an accomplice, a friend, and have a love., and Your soul is exposed to him.  such person, seems to be the Such a perfect man it seemed. The perfect relationship and everything fits into our lives ...

But it also happens that Many a times these dreams are broken., and the Disappointment comes because you do are not valued, and he does not call you anymore. , or If it he does, it is on his term, not caring if you  when he wants to and not when you need it... and never Nary a time is it for you but his. and you are wrapped In absolute sadness and helplessness you are trapped in; of not knowing what to can be done.

And Of course, it is right to feel angry. You have given everything, you have not been and left with nothing. and Suddenly everything is broken. Why do you get yourself let you trampled? Many women experience this fact of being belittled, insulted by her partner, to be in a relationships where there is no respect does not exist. [just change of pattern, nothing wrong with what you wrote.], but However, the saddest thing is that you allow this outrage. No one can or has the right to insult you. Do not give in to them. Do not let them, in the name of love, tear you to pieces you and shred your dignity.

If anything I do not like, if it criticizes all of you, if you ridicule to others, if you shout over others, if not responding to your calls, or no-shows when the flames nteresado, by avoiding try not to encounter any serious issues, if you want to stop, if you no longer have details if always thinking only of your body, you have all these characteristics, then feel free to finish it, is having a better time to be with a person life, does not deserve, not valued, not like you, only serve to your tastes ... creative woman you love, you deserve a good love, good value, why not have all day to be supporting that hurt your heart. Do not let that make you mourn. I don't really understand exactly what you are saying.  So I am going to guess.  Correct me if I am wrong.

 

My life is precious as any other.  My life is not meant to be your playground.  My life is not yours to be handled in the way you see fit.  I am a human being to be respected and loved, just like you.  If you find someone who does not treat me like a human being, let alone a queen, then it is time to end this meaningless relationship.  No need to mope over the past.  There are better fish in the ocean.

2012年10月26日
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