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First notebook entry: Introducing myself my brother's marriage ceremony, I feel very sad that the marriage ceremony could not follow my brother, I regret very, actually I want to follow all the marriage ceremony my brothers and sisters, I have made a promise to myself that I must follow, but can not, we must keep the house and we have school, I took it was their marital in Likas, VERY SAD ..... 12 this month about my eldest brother would marital .. must not be able to come too because maybe he'll marital in kuala lumpur .. not just me who can not even follow my family could not follow .. ok la safely watch videos on .. bye .. see you soon .. heee ... Digg Del.icio.us StumbleUpon Reddit RSS Posted by baby junior Email This BlogThis! Share to Twitter Share to Facebook 0 comments: Post a Comment Newer Post Older Post Home
2013年1月25日 12:33
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2014年1月16日

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My brother's marriage ceremony.

I feel very sad that I cannot see my brother's marriage ceremony. I am feeling very regretful, because I want to see all of the marriage ceremonies' of my brothers and sisters. I had made a promise to myself that I would see all of their marriages, but I can not. We must keep to the house and we go to school. I think it might have been their relationship in Likas. It's very sad ..... I thought my brother would marry in 12 months .. Although, it seems that he will not be able to come as well, because he might also marry in Kuala Lumpur .. So, it's not only me that will not be able to see my eldest brother's marriage.

Ok, I'm off to start watching videos.. bye .. see you soon .. heee ... 


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You don't need to post this. It's not needed.


It was difficult trying to correct this notebook. You need to explain which brother you are talking about, because it seems that you have many siblings(brothers and sisters) and I don't know which brother you were talking about. 

For example you can use Brother 1 did...../ Brother 2 also.....


I wasn't very sure what you were meaning to say, but I did try my best.

 

Good Luck! ;D 

2013年1月27日
Hi,Digg, it's gald to meet you. Are they your blood brothers or relatives? coz it seems you have many brothers.
2013年1月26日
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