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Feeling of the trial that I have just taken
It was a great trial. Making mistakes made me feel so nervous that I made more mistakes. The teacher was patient and mindful, for she always adjusted her speaking speed in order to let me understand. "First things first" I definitely need to develope sentence structure and also pronounciation. How do we eat a huge pig? A bite by a bite
Thoughts about the trial lesson I just had.
I had a great trial lesson. When I started to make mistakes it made me so nervous that I made more mistakes! My teacher was patient and mindful and she always adjusted her speed in order to let me understand. First things first, I definitely need to organize my sentence struction and then I need to focus on my pronunciation. Like the old saying goes "how do you eat a huge pig"? Bite by bite.
Okay, a few things to mention. When you said "First things first" then you should mention what is First therefore only one thing can be first in my opinion. Though as it was written no one would ever think twice about it being correct, a lot of people do it. Also, I have never heard of a the "how do you eat a huge pig thing and bite by bite as the answer. Similiar sayings are We will climb the mountain step by step, or something similiar to that. If you told me that saying about the pig, I would look at you like Huh? I guess, it's more visual in nature and most Americans I know don't eat the whole pig, nor do they want to. Your paragraph as it written is very well written and you should be proud of yourself. I'm just giving you additional feedback if you so choose to use it.
Feelings of about the my most recent trial trial that I have just taken
It was a great trial. Making mistakes made me feel so nervous that I made more mistakes. The teacher was patient and mindful, for she always adjusted her speaking speed in order to let get me to understand her. "First things first", I definitely need to develope sentence structure and also pronounciation. How do we eat a huge pig? A Bite by a bite.
Beautifully written! Honestly, there wasn't much to correct, so all I did was tweak the more awkwardly phrased words to make it sound slightly more natural. But it isn't really necessary, because any English speaker reading your work would understand it immediately. Great job!
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