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Hard day
I'm absolutely exhausted... There are enormous traffic jams on the main street of my city because of the big hole in the road surface. It was formed because of the broken pipe. I was standing there about 2 hours before the bus started moving. It was awful. So, I hope that it will not be traffic jams tommorow, because it's too hard for me. And what do you think about it? Have you ever been in a huge traffic jam?
2013年5月22日 14:34
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Hard day
I'm absolutely exhausted... Today, there were are enormous traffic jams on the main street of my city because of a the big hole in the road surface, caused by a It was formed because of the broken pipe. I was stuck standing there for about two 2 hours before the bus started moving. It was awful. So, I hope that there won't it will not be traffic jams tommorow, because it's too tiring hard for me. And how about you? what do you think about it? Have you ever been in a huge traffic jam?
2013年5月22日
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