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When I was young When I was Young I went to the University, I was awake at 5 o'clock on the morning to take a quick shower and arrive at time to the first class. There were good times, because I just had to study and a didn't have responsibility to make a family. At the afternoon, after when I was made my homework my girlfriend and Me went to movies. She always was select the movie that we watched. Today I finished the University, I got up at the same hour like University, I don´t have girlfriend she became in my wife I have to work to go movies. Only one thing have no changes, she always select the movie that we watch.
2013年5月22日 18:26
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<em>Very nice! I enjoyed reading this.</em>

 

When I was young

When I was young I went to the University. I was awake would wake up at 5 o'clock in the morning to take a quick shower and arrive at on time to for the first class. There They were good times, because I just had to study and a didn't have the responsibility to make of looking after a family. At In the afternoon, after when I was made had done my homework, my girlfriend and Me I went <em>[/would go]</em> to the movies. She would always was select the movie that we watched.

Now I have finished the University but I get up at the same hour time like University. I don´t have a girlfriend - she has become in my wife. I have to <em>[go to]</em> work to <em>[be able to]</em> go movies. Only one thing has not changed: she always selects the movie that we watch.

2013年5月22日

When I was young

When I was Young I went to the University, I was awake woke up at 5 o'clock on in the morning to take a quick shower and arrive at on time to the my first class. There were good times, because I just had to study only and a didn't have responsibility to make to support a family. At In the afternoon, after when I was made I finished my homework my girlfriend and Me I went to the movies. She always was selected the movie that we watched.

Today I am finished the University, I got get up at the same hour like as I did in University, but I don't have a girlfriend because she became in my wife, and I have to work in order to go to the movies. Only one thing have no changes hasn't changed, she always selects the movie that we watch.

 

Very good work. I understand almost everything that you wanted to express, but I took a guess with your phrase, "...didn't have responsibility to make a family," so please correct me if I was wrong. :-)

2013年5月28日
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