Alguém pode corrigir esta descrição de trabalho? I have 7 years of experience on these points [graphic and web design] and I think my work provides good visual information and functionality as well.

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Vinicius

2013年6月19日 16:16

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I have 7 years of experience with both graphic and web design, and I think my work provides good visual information as well as functionality.

There is nothing wrong with saying: “I have 7 years of experience on these points [graphic and web design]” but I think the way I wrote it above sounds a little bit better. Good job!!

2013年6月20日

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