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Grammar check, please correct! Hi, I'm trying to learn new words and grammar that I think are difficult, so if you could help me correct them I would be very grateful! Thanks! 我晚饭的时候喜欢吃牛肉。 I like to eat beef for dinner. 我来我的家工作以后,我一般喜欢喝一杯酒。 When I come home from work, I generally like to have a glass of wine. 你喜欢做什么工作以后? What do you like to do after work? 我的中文不太好,可是天天我一点好。 My Chinese is not good, but I get a little better every day.
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Grammar check, please correct!

Hi, I'm trying to learn new words and grammar that I think are difficult, so if you could help me correct them I would be very grateful! Thanks!

我晚饭的时候喜欢吃牛肉。 I like to eat beef for dinner.

我下班回家以后,一般喜欢喝一杯酒。 When I come home from work, I generally like to have a glass of wine.

你喜欢下班后喜欢干什么? What do you like to do after work?

我的中文不太好,可是也在每天一点点变好。 My Chinese is not good, but I get a little better every day.



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2013年6月26日
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晚饭我喜欢吃牛肉。I like to eat beef for dinner.

下班回家后,一般来说,我喜欢喝杯酒。/下班回家后,一般我喜欢喝杯酒。When I come home from work, I generally like to have a glass of wine. 

下班后你喜欢做什么?What do you like to do after work? 

我的中文不好,但是我每天都在进步/我的中文不好,但是它每天都在变好。(the first one is better though not translated directly) My Chinese is not good, but I get a little better every day.

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我晚饭的时候喜欢吃牛肉。 I like to eat beef for dinner.

当我下班回家后,我一般喜欢喝一杯酒 When I come home from work, I generally like to have a glass of wine.

你下班后喜欢做什么 What do you like to do after work? 


我的中文不太好,可是我每天都在进步。 My Chinese is not good, but I get a little better every day.

2013年6月26日
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Grammar check, please correct!

Hi, I'm trying to learn new words and grammar that I think are difficult, so if you could help me correct them I would be very grateful! Thanks!

我晚饭的时候喜欢吃牛肉(Perfect) but also can change to 我晚餐喜歡吃牛肉。 I like to eat beef for dinner.

當我下班回家后,我一般喜欢喝杯酒。 When I come home from work, I generally like to have a glass of wine.

下班後你喜欢做點什麼? What do you like to do after work?

我的中文不太好,可是每天我都能進步一點。 My Chinese is not good, but I get a little better every day.

2013年6月26日
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Grammar check, please correct!

Hi, I'm trying to learn new words and grammar that I think are difficult, so if you could help me correct them I would be very grateful! Thanks!

我晚饭的时候喜欢吃牛肉。 I like to eat beef for dinner.

我来我的家工作以后  当我下班回到家后,我一般喜欢喝一杯酒。 When I come home from work, I generally like to have a glass of wine.   

你喜欢做什么工作以后? 下班后你喜欢做些什么? What do you like to do after work?

我的中文不太好,可是我每天都在进步一点。可是天天我一点好。 My Chinese is not good, but I get a little better every day.

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