GEISER OMAR ANIBAL
HOMEWORK help me, please, my homework have errors, but can't find. Hello, My name is Susan. I'm fourteen and I live in Germany. My hobbys are going to discos, sometimes I listen to music in the radio. In x summer I go bathing in a lake. I haven't any brothers or sisters. We take busses to school. I visit year 9 at my school. My birthday is on Friday. I hope I will become a new guitar. I'm looking forward to get an e-mail from you. Yours, Susan
2013年7月4日 17:12
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HOMEWORK

Help me, please, my homework has errors, but I can't find them.

Hello,
My name is Susan. I'm fourteen and I live in Germany. My hobbies are going to discos and listening to music on the radio. In summer I go bathing in a lake. I haven't any brothers or sisters. We take busses to school. I am in year 9 at my school. My birthday is on Friday. I hope I will get a new guitar.
I'm looking forward to getting an e-mail from you.

Yours,
Susan

 

<em>[Good.  You used 'become a new guitar' because the word for 'receive' in German is 'bekommen'.  'Become' in English translates to 'werden' or 'geworden' in German.]</em>

2013年7月4日
HOMEWORK help me, please, my homework have errors, but can't find. Hello, My name is Susan. I'm fourteen and I live in Germany. My hobbys are going to discos, sometimes I listen to music in the radio. In x summer I go bathing in a lake. I haven't any brothers or sisters. We take busses to school. I visit year 9 at my school. My birthday is on Friday. I hope I will become a new guitar. I'm looking forward to get an e-mail from you. Yours, Susan
susan left for school but she will stop by and pick me up
2023年3月20日

HOMEWORK

Help me, please, my homework has errors, but can't find them.

Hello,
My name is Susan. I'm fourteen and I live in Germany. My hobbies are going to discos, sometimes I listen to music on the radio. In x summer I go bathing in a lake. I don't have any brothers or sisters. We take busses to school. I am in the ninth grade at my school. My birthday is on Friday. I hope I will get a new guitar.
I'm looking forward to get an e-mail from you.

Yours,
Susan
2017年5月21日
opps - Hello, My name is Susan. I'm fourteen and I live in Germany. My hobby is going to discos, sometimes I listen to music on the radio. In summer I go bathing in a lake. I haven't any brothers or sisters. We take busses to school. I study in the seventh form. ?- (not sure, maybe the previous answer was correct). My birthday is on Friday. I hope I will get a new guitar. I'm looking forward to getting an e-mail from you
2017年5月21日
Hello, My name is Susan. I'm fourteen and I live in Germany. My hobby is going to discos, sometimes I listen to music on the radio. In summer I go bathing in a lake. I haven't any brothers or sisters. We take busses to school. I study in the seventh form. ?- (not sure, maybe the previous answer was correct). My birthday is on Friday. I hope I will get a new guitar. And yes, of course the task itself.-->Totally agree with a guy below I'm looking forward to getting an e-mail from you.
2017年5月21日
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