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Please edit my short summary :) According to the reading passage, a British Mathematician, Alan Turing conducted the experimentation, referred to as the Turing Test, that computers can give the right answers from human’s questions. Although many contests with a significant huge money and a renowned prize for testifying computers can be thinking have been arranged in 20c, until recently, no computer has verified themselves thinking. From demonstrating the validity of the Turing Test by “on behavior” rather than “on thought”, philosopher, John Searle conducted the experimentation called as the Chinese Room, which only English speakers can figure out questions in Chinese through a computer terminal. According the lecturer, generally, the English speakers cannot understand the question, however, if the question with an extensive and apprehensible reference can be given, they can know the real meaning of the questions. So, although the subjects don’t know the questions in Chinese letters, they can catch the real meaning so that they can show the behavior in regards with the questions

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Please edit my short summary :)

According to the reading passage, a British Mathematician named Alan Turing conducted the an experimentation, referred to as the Turing Test. The idea was that computers can give the right answers from to a human’s questions. Although Many contests with have offered a significant cash reward huge money and a renowned prizes for testifying proving computers can be thinking have been arranged in 20c, until recently, but no computer has been verified themselves to be "thinking".
From demonstrating To demonstrate the validity of the Turing Test by “on behavior” rather than “on thought”, philosopher, John Searle conducted the experimentation called as the Chinese Room, in which only English speakers can figure out questions in Chinese through a computer terminal. According the lecturer, generally, the English speakers cannot understand the question, however, if the question with an extensive and apprehensible reference can be given, they can know the real understand the meaning of the questions. So, although the subjects don’t know the questions in Chinese letters, they can catch the real meaning so that they can show the behavior in regards with the questions


I assume this is your practicing for some type of exam.  Work on shorter sentences.  Run on sentences will lead to confusion with technical things like this.  Just be forward, concise and direct.  I believe many people in english even make this mistake.  It's almost as if we feel we have to write more than necessary.  "Please write 2-3 pages for each subject".  How many times have we seen something similar?  The only goal for writing is to convey information.  Unless it is an artform or a stylized non-fiction piece, there is no reason to ramble.  Just my opinion! Good job.

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