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A nice day Hi guys! I get up very happy today. It was a nice day. This morning was rainning. But after the sun was shining. I don´t leaving home. Later,I was light a fire. I was caught my computer and I was learning some languages. I´m tired. Ohhhhh. It´s Monday tomorrow.I have will go to my job,for evening. At the morning i can go to buy to shop,or take a coffe in some Café. Later,when I was leaved of my work and I get at home,I´ll have a tea to have sweet dreams. What I´ll dream? Who I´ll dream? Who knows? The life is beautiful. We use it. Bye at all.

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A nice day

Hi guys!
I got up feeling very happy today. It was a nice day. This morning it was rainning (out). But after(it rained) (OR but later on, the sun...) the sun was shining. I don´t wasn't leaving home. 
Later on, I lit a fire. My attention was caught by my computer and I was went on to learning some languages. I´m tired. Ohhhhh. It´s Monday tomorrow. I will have to go in to work for the evening. At In the morning i can go to buy from a shop,or take an order of coffe in some Café. Later,when I leave from work and I get at home,I´ll have a cup of tea to have (OR for inducing) sweet dreams. 
What I´ll  will I dream of (or about)? Who I´ll will I dream of (or about)? Who knows? The Life is beautiful. We use all live it. 
Bye at to all. (OR ---Bye everyone!/Goodbye for now everyone!/ Bye-bye to everyone here!)

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 My Comment:

I like this entry! It was very down-to-earth.(down-to-earth means very realistic and truthful)

Your not bad at English :) It was easy to understand what you wanted to say here. :) 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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A nice day

Hi guys!
I get up very happy today. It was is a nice day [el presente]. This morning it was rainning raining. But after later the sun was shining. I don´t didn't leaving home.
Later,I was light lit a fire. I was caught working on my computer and I was learning some languages. I´m tired. Ohhhhh. It´s Monday tomorrow.I will have will to go to my job,for that evening. At In the morning i can go to buy to shoping,or take have a coffe in some Café. Later,when I was leaved of my leave work and I get at home,I´ll have a cup of tea to have sweet dreams relax me.
What will I I´ll dream? Who will I  I´ll dream of? Who knows? The life is beautiful. We use it.
Bye at all.

 

Bueno !

 

que soñaste de? diga me por favor :)

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