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Alina
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Ok......To start with, I realy like English language. I like to read books in original, listen to English songs and to write my own... And as we all know it's very important in modern world to speak English. The Great Britain is also great with it's eleganse and the people - sensible and interesting.I'd also like to learn Japanese, it's dream of my childhood. I am interested in all that has connection with this country: history, culture, fashion, art music an so on. What is important for me, my friend Elly supports my obsession ^_^)))))))
2010年11月8日 18:23
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Ok......To start with, I realy like the English language. I like to read books in its original (language?), listen to English songs, and <strike>to</strike> write my own... And as we all know, it's very important in the modern world to speak English. <strike>The</strike> Great Britain is also great with it's elegance <strike>and</strike> . The people - sensible and interesting. I'd also like to learn Japanese because it's a dream <strike>of</strike> from my childhood. I am interested in all that has connection with this country: history, culture, fashion, art, music, and so on. That's what is important <strike>for</strike> to me. My friend Elly supports my obsession. ^_^)))))))Grammar (capitalizations, misspellings, etc.)
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A very interesting read and good English. :]
2010年11月8日
Та не бути мені справжнім отаку, коли я кажу неправду, що ти моя сама дорога няшка-кавайняшка і сестричка по духу!!!!!!=)))))) і я ніколи в тобі не сумнівалась...
2010年11月9日
Ооооо, моя пуся я тебе ОбОжНюЮ !!!! І тільки попробуй хоч раз в цьому засумніватись =D
2010年11月9日
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