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Self-introduction Hello. My name is Sakura. I'm seventeen. I live in Yokohama. I have a sister. I like listen to music,my favorite musicians are ONE OK ROCK,YUI and P!NK. I like noodles, especially I love spaghettis. My pet phrase is "ほんとに?". Recently,I’m addicted to the comic books "Strobo edge". Thank you.
2013年12月31日 12:19
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Self-introduction

Hello. My name is Sakura. I'm seventeen. I live in Yokohama. I have a sister. I like listen to music,[a space comes after a comma]my favorite musicians are ONE OK ROCK,YUI and P!NK. I like noodles, especially I love spaghettis[spaghetti is singular]. My pet phrase is "ほんとに?".
Recently,[a space comes after a comma]I’m addicted to the comic books "Strobo Edge[Normally we capitalise book titles]". Thank you.

 

Hi Sakura, your English is almost perfect and you are a really interesting person! I love manga too, I will look up "Stobo Edge" as I've not heard of that one. What's is about? I really like OK ONE ROCK and Yui too. What does the phrase "hontoni" mean in English? A what does it mean to have a "pet phrase"?Have a nice day! :)

2013年12月31日
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Self-introduction

Hello. My name is Sakura. I'm seventeen. I live in Yokohama. I have a sister. I like to listen to music. My favourite musicians are ONE OK ROCK,YUI and P!NK. I like noodles, I especially love spaghetti. My pet phrase is "ほんとに?".
Recently, I got addicted to the comic book "Strobo edge". Thank you.

2013年12月31日
Self-introduction(revise) Hello. My name is Sakura. I'm seventeen. I live in Yokohama. I have a sister. I like to listen to music,my favourite musicians are ONE OK ROCK,YUI and P!NK. I like noodles, I especially love spaghetti. My pet phrase is "ほんとに?". Recently, I got addicted to the comic book "[Strobo Edge]". Thank you.
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