Colours
I love many colours: White, green, black, yellow, and pink.
White: I think it represents purity and calmness(or "tranquility" is a good word too!). I love white mobile phones.
Black: Many people may think it is a symbol of the dark but I think it makes people look more steady <em>(what do you mean by "steady"?)</em>. So, I like black.
I think , in the a book that uses a white background with black text that can make people calm and also looks more clealy clear.
Green: I think it represents when spring is coming. It makes people feel the vitality<em>(what are you trying to say here?)</em>. I like lying on the grassland and feeling close to nature feeling.
Yellow: It looks energetic and active. It is the colour of wisdom. I have a pair of sports shoes and they look cool.
Pink: This was my favourite colour in my childhood. It is a dreamful colour. It may be girls' favourite colour.
Colours can change our moods.
My English is poor so I welcome all of you to point out my mistakes. Let Help me make progress. (≧^ω^≦)
<em>Good job! I really liked your descriptions of colours (also spelled "colors" in American English) and this was a very fun post to read. Colours can definately change our moods and make us feel better when we're feeling down. (When we're feeling sad.) </em>
<em>Please be careful with spaces in your sentence. Make sure to put one after each period, ok? (^.^)/</em>
<em>Also you used a few commas that you did not need so I took them away and I tried to make it sound more natural. </em>
<em>Keep up the good work!!!</em>