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Correcting help me, please 1. According to rapidly growth economic in recent years, weaknesses and backward transportation infrastructure of Viet Nam can't respond to high demand about passengers and commodities transporting. 2. The government has issued a lots of useful remedies in order to reduce pressure in transport system and focused growth public traffic vehicles, limited private traffic vehicles. 3. The government licensed for a little foreign airline so as to raises passengers transport capacity to airline traffic when road and railway traffic are being overloaded.
2014年4月16日 02:35
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Correcting help me, please

1. According to rapidly growth economic in recent years, weaknesses and backward transportation infrastructure of Viet Nam can't respond to high demand about passengers and commodities transporting.
2. The government has issued a lots of useful remedies in order to reduce pressure in transport system and focused growth public traffic vehicles, limited private traffic vehicles.
3. The government licensed for a little foreign airline so as to raises passengers transport capacity to airline traffic when road and railway traffic are being overloaded.

 

 

Hi,

 

This is very good! There are only a couple of words I would change, and a few tense errors:

 

1. According to rapidly growth of the economy in recent years, weaknesses and backward transportation infrastructure of Viet Nam cannot respond to a high demand of passengers and commodities transporting.

 

2. The government have issued multiple useful remedies in order to reduce pressure on the transport system and focused growth of public traffic vehicles and limited private traffic vehicles.

 

3. The government licensed for a small foreign airline in order to raise passenger transport capacity to airline traffic when road and railway traffic are being overloaded.

 

Hope that was helpful!

 

 

 

2014年4月16日
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Correcting help me, please

1. According to rapidly growth economic in recent years, weaknesses and backward transportation infrastructure of Viet Nam can't respond to high demand about passengers and commodities transporting.
2. The government has issued a lots of useful remedies in order to reduce pressure in transport system and focused growth public traffic vehicles, limited private traffic vehicles.
3. The government licensed for a little foreign airline so as to raises passengers transport capacity to airline traffic when road and railway traffic are being overloaded.

1.  The transport infrastructure still does not cope with the volume of traffic despite rapid economic growth in recent years in Vietnam.

2.  The government has tried many ways in which  to reduce traffic pressure and has focused on the growth of public and private road use.

3.  A small foreign airline has been license by the government to increase the capacity of our airline in order to help cope with the overloaded road and railway traffic.

2014年4月16日
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