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Is it correct? I want someone to repair my writing. m(_ _)m On May 18, Switzerland held referendum on introducing a minimum wage of 22 Swiss francs(2500yen in Japan) an hour. As a result, voters have rejected this proposal but it is extremely surprising for me to know the fact that almost all workers are paid near the standard of that proposal.
2014年5月23日 06:17
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Is it correct? I want someone to repair correct / check my writing.

 

On May 18, Switzerland held a referendum on introducing a minimum wage of 22 Swiss francs (2500 Japanese yen) per / an hour. As a result, Voters ended up rejecting this proposal but it was extremely surprising for me to find out that most workers are paid almost as much as near to the standard amount in the proposal. (or just, "near to the proposed minimum wage")

 

とても良かったですよ。

Actually, Switzerland does not have a minimum wage. It says so in this article. http://money.cnn.com/2014/05/18/news/economy/switzerland-minimum-wage-vote/index.html

 

I was amazed that the voters rejected the proposal!!

 

以前の訂正はありがとうございました。

 

*ended up -この場合は、「最後に」を意味する In the end, the voters rejected the proposal も言える。

それから、The result was a rejection by voters of the proposal. も可能です!

 

2014年5月28日

Is it correct? I want someone to repair my writing. m(_ _)m

On May 18, Switzerland held a referendum on introducing a minimum wage of 22 Swiss francs(2500yen in Japan) an hour. As a result, voters have rejected this proposal which is extremely surprising for me to know the fact that almost all workers are paid near the standard of that proposal.

2014年5月23日
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