IELTS 4 TEST 1 WRITING TASK 2 Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. comics b

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IELTS 4 TEST 1 WRITING TASK 2 Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. comics books radio television film theatre It is a time of information, and media play an important role in out life. Personally, I’d prefer books, television and radio when I am sharing information. One thing good about books is they are cheap, and almost everybody can afford a book. That’s the reason why they are popolar among people and the information on the book would be spead extently. However, as it takes time to publish a book, the information turned to be out-dated when it reaches people. There is no need for media such as television to worry about the problem of out-dated information as books. You can find the lastest information on television, for example, news broadcast is played on television three to four times a day to show people what just happened. What's more, information on television become vivid. It means that information is communicated not only by words but also by sound, vision and vedioes, which makes it easier to understand. But the price of television stands in people’s way. It costs a lot to buy one, and many families can’t afford it. Radio, for me, is the most effective medium for communicating information. It is not as expensive as television, yet it spreads the lastest information. It allows the illiteracy and the blind receiving the information easily which books and television can’t do. It is not as vivid as television and cheap as books, but its advantages overweight its disadvantages. Overall, I consider radio is the most effective medium comparing to books and television in spite of its disadvantages.

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IELTS 4 TEST 1 WRITING TASK 2

Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.
comics books radio television film theatre

In today's world of instant information, media plays an important role in our life. Personally, I prefer books, television and radio for sharing receiving information.

One good thing about books is that they are cheap. Almost everybody can afford a book. That is one reason why they are popular among people. The information from a book would be spead extently can be widely spread. However, as it takes time to publish a book, the information turned to can be outdated when by the time it reaches people the public.

With television, there is no need to worry about the problem of outdated information as books. You can find the latest information on television. For example, a news broadcast is played on television three to four times a day to show people what just happened current news stories. Also, information on television become vivid can be more impactful. Information is communicated not only by words, but also by sound and video, which makes it easier to understand. But the price of a television puts it at a disadvantage. It costs a lot to buy one. Many families can’t afford it.

In my opinion, radio, is the most effective medium for communicating information. It is not as expensive as television, yet it spreads the latest information. It allows the illiterate and the blind to receive the information easily, which books and television cannot do. It is not a visual medium such as television or as cheap affordable as books, but it's advantages outweigh its disadvantages.

Overall, I consider radio is the most effective medium comparing to books and television in spite of its disadvantages. (I think you can omit this final sentence, because you just stated this idea in the previous paragraph).

Great essay! I agree with you about those being the top 3 from that list. I made some grammatical changes throughout. Please let me know if you have any questions. I am also available as a community tutor if you are interested!

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