My som Son

Last year I gave birth to my lovely son.  I found taking care of a baby is so hard.  And be being a full-time mother is also very torturing.  I hope my baby can will be healthy.  He got a high fever a few days ago, and these days I feel felt very sad.  Fortunately, he has recovered now.  I love you so much,  my darling baby.

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Your writing is very good, well done.  Be sure to add a space (" ") after every comma (",") and every full stop (".").

I am pleased that your son is now feeling better.

My Son

Last year, I gave birth to my lovely son. I find taking care of a baby so hard. And being a full-time mother is also very torturing. I hope my baby will be healthy. He came down with a high fever a few days ago; these days I feel very sad. Fortunately, he has recovered now. I love you so much my darling baby.

My son

Last year I gave birth to my lovely son.I found taking care of a baby is so hard.And be a full-time mother is also very torturing.I hope my baby can be healthy.He got a high fever a few days ago,these days I feel very sad.Fortunately，he has recovered now.I love you so much my darling baby.