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Time schoolchildren(10-11 years old) spend on different home activities The graph shows the two types of home activities which the schoolchildren spent on time with since the year 2000 to present. Looking more closely at the trend for computer, it can be seen that a significant took place during the period, with rising to almost 22 hours per week, relative to almost 3 hours per week in 2000, while outstrip to the type of TV with 15 hours per week in 2004. TV were stable until 2003. Then it steadily fell to 15 hours per week in 2004, the figure have three quarter then begining. From then onwards it fluctuated, but the general trend was stable(although it peak of 16 hours per week in 2006). To conclusion that, as the advance of Internet, the number of schoolchildren spent more time on computer,which they may be use it to search more information or study.
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Time schoolchildren(10-11 years old) spend on different home activities

The graph shows the two types of home activities which the schoolchildren spent on time with since the year 2000 to present.

Looking more closely at the trend for computers, it can be seen that a significant <em></em>(increase or decrease) took place during the period between..., with (what?) rising to almost 22 hours per week, relative to almost 3 hours per week in 2000, while outstrip to the type of TV with 15 hours per week in 2004 <em>(</em><em>break this up into 2-3 sentences)</em> . The (trend) for TV was stable until 2003. Then it steadily fell to 15 hours per week in 2004. The figure have three quarter then begining. From then onwards <em>(from when? indicate when) </em>it fluctuated, but the general trend was stable(although it peaked of at 16 hours per week in 2006).

To conclusion is that, as with the advance of the Internet, the number of schoolchildren who spent more time on computers,which they may be use it to search for more information or study, (complete the sentence)


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2014年9月7日
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