Ana Helena
The Man on the Window A man is sitting in the window .and he's playing the guitar to his girlfriend. He's wearing a dark green hat, a light blue and white plaid shirt and white pents. She's standing next to the man outside the house. She's holding a scarf whit both hands. She's singing a song. She's wearing a red blouse and a broun skirt. The house is very old. We can see the bricks.
2014年10月14日 11:24
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The Man in the Window

A man is sitting in the window .and he's playing the guitar to his girlfriend.
He's wearing a dark green hat, a light blue and white plaid shirt and white pAnts.
She's standing next to the man outside the house. She's holding a scarf wiHt both hands.
She's singing a song.
She's wearing a red blouse and a broWn skirt.
The house is very old. We can see the bricks.

 

Great job, but just a few typos

2014年10月14日

The Man in the Window

A man is sitting in the window and he's playing the guitar to his girlfriend.
He's wearing a dark green hat, a light blue and white plaid shirt and white pants.
She's standing next to the man outside the house. She's holding a scarf whit both hands.
She's singing a song.
She's wearing a red blouse and a brown skirt.
The house is very old. We can see the bricks.

2014年10月24日

The Man in the Window

A man is sitting in the window .and he's playing the guitar to his girlfriend.
He's wearing a dark green hat, a light blue and white plaid shirt and white pants.
She's standing next to the man outside the house. She's holding a scarf whit with both hands.
She's singing a song.
She's wearing a red blouse and a brown skirt.
The house is very old; we can see the bricks.

2014年10月21日
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