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Obama votes in Chicago The President Barack Obama voted today in Chicago in advance of the elections of November 4th, where his party is playing its domain in the Senate. Obama is in Chicago to participate in a Democrat recaudation, but before that event he were by sorprise to the Martin Luther King Jr. community center to vote, near to the adress where he lived before his election as President. The President voted in advance also in 2012 and as now, in the same center. That year, he was participating to win his second period in the White House. Today, in press declarations to the journalists that were with him, said that "the most important charge in a democracy is to be a citizen". Next November 4th Democrats are fighting to conserve the Senate and, according to previews, is so hard that they could recover the House of Representatives, that is under Republican domain.
2014年10月21日 02:56
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Either "President Barack Obama voted..." or "The President, Barack Obama, voted..." I don't know what you might mean by recaudation. It's not an English word. In your fourth paragraph, remember that English cannot leave out the subject pronoun the way Spanish can. Here, "said" needs a subject. I think something similar may be happening in your final sentence. What "is so hard"?
2014年10月21日
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