Help to correct Below is a topic of speaking session and my preparation. Could anyone help me to correct it? Thx. Describe a meal you invited others to have at your home or a restaurant. You shou

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Help to correct Below is a topic of speaking session and my preparation. Could anyone help me to correct it? Thx. Describe a meal you invited others to have at your home or a restaurant. You should say: who you invited; where you ate; what you ate; and explain how they felt about this meal. Well…I am going to talk about one lunch that I invited my friends to have at a restaurant. Virtually, it is a hop pot restaurant running by Taiwanese, named 12hotpot. It has a branch in a department store called BAOLAND Plaza, in which my son usually participates in his craft class. And I have a couple friend who have a daughter as same age as my son and they attempted to join the same class, so last Sunday it was the trial class for their daughter and I took this chance to invite them for lunch with my family. 12hotpot has two main combos, and each of them comes with a pot, main course such as supreme beef, side dish like noodles, vegetable platter, special sauce, and a cup of beverage. The major difference between two combos is that the one we called Saute Recipe Combo has more vegetables and less red meat. By comparison, another one we called Shabu Shabu Combo has more red meat. My wife and I ordered two combos of Saute Recipe, and my couple friend ordered one Saute Recipe and one Shabu Shabu. Well, they really appreciated my treat and enjoyed this hop pot since compared to others, the environment of 12hotpot was much cleaner, and the dishes were also health and clean, especially Saute Recipe, which had high-fibre, high-protein and low calorie. Moreover, the price is cost-effective.

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Help to correct

Below is a topic of speaking session and my preparation. Could anyone help me to correct it? Thx.

Describe a meal you invited others to have at your home or a restaurant. You should say: who you invited; where you ate; what you ate; and explain how they felt about this meal.

Well…I am going to talk about one lunch that I invited my friends to have at a restaurant. Virtually, It is a hop hot pot restaurant running by Taiwanese. The resturant is part of a chain named 12hotpot. It has a branch in a department store called BAOLAND Plaza, in which where my son usually participates in his craft class. And I have a couple of friends who have a daughter as who is same age as my son. and They attempted to join the same class, so last Sunday it was the their daughter took a trial class for their, and I took this chance to invite them for lunch with my family.

12hotpot has two main combos, and each of them comes with a pot. The main course menu includes such choices as supreme beef, side dishes may include like noodles, vegetable platter, special sauce, and a cup of beverage. The major difference between two combos is are that the one we called Saute Recipe Combo has more vegetables and less red meat. By comparison, another The other one we called Shabu Shabu Combo has more red meat.

My wife and I ordered two combos of Saute Recipe, and my couple husband and wife friends ordered one Saute Recipe and one Shabu Shabu. Well, They really appreciated my treat and enjoyed this hop hot pot since compared to others restaurants, the environment of 12hotpot was much cleaner, and the dishes were also healthy and clean, especially the Saute Recipe, which had high-fiber, high-protein and low calories. Moreover, the price is cost-effective. Most importantly, the cost is reasonable.