A LETTER TO ANNE Dear Anne, How are you? Thank you very much for your last letter in which you asked me about some changes I had made in my room. I wasn't keen of my room because I thought that it wa

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A LETTER TO ANNE Dear Anne, How are you? Thank you very much for your last letter in which you asked me about some changes I had made in my room. I wasn't keen of my room because I thought that it was good for little children, so I made some changes. First of all I painted the walls red and I hugh new paintings. I bought a big desk and a comfortable chair. I think that my room is fantastic now! Endeed it is more comfortable and lovely. That's all for now. Write back soon and tell me all your news. LOVE

2014年11月28日 17:58

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A LETTER TO ANNE

Dear Anne,
How are you? Thank you very much for your last letter in which you asked me about some changes I had made in my room. I wasn't keen of my room because I thought that it was good for little children, so I made some changes.
First of all I painted the walls red and I hugh hung new paintings. I bought a big desk and a comfortable chair. I think that my room is fantastic now! Endeed Indeed it is more comfortable and lovely. That's all for now. Write back soon and tell me all your news.
LOVE

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<em>Good job, only some minor corrections!</em>

2014年11月29日

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