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My hobby - Doing sport I remember playing football when I was a child. Always I forgot to do my bag the day before the match, and when I woke up in the morning I had to looked for my boots, my socks, etc. I stopped playing football when I was fifteen, and now I practice swiming every day. I spend time reading about how I can improve. I love to sport, I think I have inherited it from my mother´s family, because her brothers love do a lot of different sports. I can´t help doing any sport, I can´t stand being without doing anything. But I´m not the worse, my brother practise a lot of different sports. He loves to practise new sports. He prefers to do do sport in opened places, so that he usually practises cycling, running, football.. Now he feels like learning to skiing, but he doesn´t have a lot of time to go to skiing, but I´m sure he isn´t going to give up learning to skiing

2014年12月27日 21:02

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My hobby - Doing Playing sports

I remember playing football when I was a child. Always I always forgot to do pack my bag the day before the match, and when I woke up in the morning I had to looked for my boots, my socks, etc.
I stopped playing football when I was fifteen, and now I practice swimming every day.
I spend time reading about how I can improve.
I love to sport, I think I have inherited it from my mother´s family, because her brothers love do a lot of different sports.
I can´t help doing playing any sport, I can´t stand being without doing anything to do.
But I´m not the worse worst, my brother practises a lot of different sports. He loves to practise new sports. He prefers to do do sport in opened places, so that he usually practises cycling, running, football..
Now he feels like learning to skiing, but he doesn´t have a lot of time to go to skiing, but I´m sure he isn´t going to give up learning to skiing

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2014年12月28日

My hobby - Doing sports

I remembered playing football when I was a child. I always forgot to pack my bag the day before the match, and when I woke up in the morning I had to look for my boots, my socks, etc.

I stopped playing football when I was fifteen, and now I practice swimming every day.
I spend time reading about how I can improve.
I love sports. I think I inherited this love of sports from my mother´s family, because her brothers love do a lot of different sports.
I can´t help getting involved in sports because I can´t stand not having something to do.

My brother loves sports more than I do. He practices a lot of different sports. He loves to practice new sports. He prefers sports which are played in opened places, so he usually practices cycling, running, and football.

Now he feels like learning to ski. He doesn´t have a lot of time to go to skiing, but I´m sure this will not deter him from learning to ski.

2014年12月27日

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