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friday in my cauntry today is holiday and very warm day in my cauntry (algeria) i decided with some friends to go to the dam and fish some fishes this evening after praying juma
2015年2月20日 12:08
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Friday in my Country (1)

Today is a holiday. It is a very warm day in my country, Algeria. (2) My friends and I decided to go to the dam and fish this evening, after Jumu'ah. (3)(4)

 

(1) Titles in English have capitals on most words.

(2) I would say that "Today is a holiday" and "it is a very warm day" are separate ideas, needing their own sentences.

(3) Did you decide with friends, or did you decide by yourself? Here, I structured your sentence as if you and your friends decided together.

(4) Would you pray Jumu'ah at the dam or would you go to the dam after Jumu'ah? Here, I decided you wanted to go to the dam after Friday Prayers.

 

Have fun with the English!

2015年5月26日

Friday in my country

Today is holiday and a very warm day in my country, Algeria. I decided  to go to the dam with some friends and catch some fish this evening after praying juma (Friday prayer).

2015年5月8日

Friday in my Country

Today is a holiday and a very warm day in my Country, (Algeria). My friends and I decided to go to the dam and fish some fishes this evening after praying Juma.

2015年6月2日

friday in my cauntry

today is holiday and very warm day in my cauntry (algeria) i decided with some friends to go to the dam and fish some fishes this evening after praying juma

2015年4月20日

friday in my cauntry

today is holiday and very warm day in my cauntry (algeria) i decided with some friends to go to the dam and fish some fishes this evening after praying juma

Friday in my country.

Today is a holiday and very warm in my country of Algeria. I decided to go to the dam with some friends this evening to fish after praying. 

2015年4月20日
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