Roman Mart
This's my first notebook entry I'm Roman. I'm from Russia. I'm 25 and tomorrow will be 26 years old. I study on the last course in Mining University of Saint-Petersburg. And I work in Scientific-Research-Institute. I love sports, good books, hip-hop and electronic genres of music. To be continue...
2015年2月28日 19:04
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This's [1] my first notebook entry

I'm Roman. I'm from Russia. I'm 25, and tomorrow will be 26 years old.  [2]

I'm in my last year at the Mining University of Saint-Petersburg.

And I work in the Scientific-Research-Institute.

I love sports, good books, hip-hop, and electronic genres of music.

To be continued...

 

[1] "This's" is not "wrong," but it is nonstandard and informal.  

[2]  Variant:  ... and tomorrow I'll turn 26.

2015年3月1日
Thank you!
2015年3月1日
Happy birthday!
2015年2月28日
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