Nicole
Monday Today is Monday, it is morning and it is a sunny day. I'll have lunch with my family, but at the afternoon I'll take a bus to another city. Is because I am at the University, and is in another city. On weekend I'll come back for my parent's house. I'm lucky that it is not so far away.
2015年3月2日 12:19
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Monday

Today is Monday, it is morning and it is a sunny day. I'll have lunch with my family, but at/in the afternoon I'll take a bus to another city. That is because I am at the University and it's located in another city. On the weekend I'll come back to my parent's house. I'm lucky that it is not so far away.

2015年3月2日
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