March 3rd
Yesterday I went to shopping in city square, and I bought facial masks, a wallet and something to eat. I felt so tired so I went to sleep early yesterday. I don't like to shopping because I feel bored. I want to live a more meaningful life.
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Hi! It's easy to feel bored when you don't know what you really like to do.. Try to remember the moments when you really felt happy and excited about something, and find ways to do more of that in your everyday life. Hope you have a better day tomorrow! :)
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