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Being a celebrity: a dream or a nightmare Nowadays a lot of people dream with the idea of being a celebrity. People dream of having thousands of followers on twitter, to have millions on youtube or succeed in hollywood. Being a celebrity have a lot of advantages. The main advantage is that you will have many opportunities. For example, hotels, fashion brands, food brands or any brand of a product will want you and they will send you their products because if you take a picture with them, your fans buy it. You can get many things for free. In addition you will travel a lot and earn a lot of money. On the other hand, you won´t have privacity. For instance all your life will be publish in magazines, in social media, on television, etc, so all your life will be observe by all the world. Furthermore you won´t know who you can trust because people will want to approach you by fame. To sump up, being a celebrity have a lot of advantages but you have to be careful because it can work against you and you can lose your real life.
2015年3月15日 15:30
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Being a celebrity: a dream or a nightmare

Nowadays a lot of people dream with the idea of being a celebrity. People dream of having thousands of followers on twitter, to have millions on youtube or succeed in hollywood.

Being a celebrity gives you lots of advantages. The main advantage is that you will have many opportunities. For example, hotels, fashion brands, food brands or any brand of a product will want you and they will send you their products because if you take a picture with them, your fans buy it. You can get many things for free.
In addition you will travel a lot and earn a lot of money.

On the other hand, you won´t have privacy. For instance all your life will be publish in magazines, in social media, on television, etc, so all your life will be observe by all the world. Furthermore you won´t know who you can trust because people will want to approach you by fame.

To sum up, being a celebrity gives you a lot of advantages but you have to be careful because it can work against you and you can lose your real life. 

 

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2015年3月15日
Very well written ..sandra good job
2015年3月15日
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