Joy Kang
April 2
Today is very hot !Let me and friends feel uncomfortable.so we go to convenience store when lunch time,because we need some cool drinks!!!
2015年4月2日 07:41
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April 2
Today is very hot !Let me and friends feel uncomfortable.so we go to convenience store when lunch time,because we need some cool drinks!!!
Correction:
Today is very hot! My friends and I felt uncomfortable, so we went to the convenience store at lunchtime because we needed some cool drinks!!!
Not bad!
2015年4月2日
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