我的一天 / My Day
大家好！今天我想写一点中文來复习我认识的汉字。
我也想朗读我的短文來(to)实践練習(practise)我的发音，请你告诉我你對我發音的想的想法(thoughts)。
（这个短文下面有一个录音檔案(file)）
我今天早上八点起床。
起床以后我覺得很餓，於是我从我的卧室走去了我们的厨房吃了一点东西。，我今天早上比较饿！
平时我早上會吃一碗燕麦粥，因为燕麦粥这个菜不但很好吃，而且一点又(also)蠻(quite)健康的。
但是，我今天(早上)不想吃(一碗)燕麦粥；，所以，於是我吃了两片塗有果醬的面包片。
→Toast：吐司
因为我妈妈跟对我说「我们在家裡(in the house)没有牛奶了，你去商店买點(some)牛奶吧！順便还有，你买你晚餐想要吃晚饭的食品東西，好吗？」所以上午十一点钟左右(or so)我去了一趟(a trip)商店。
→順便
我邊聽中文邊走路去商店。
→邊A邊B:you doing both A and B at the same time →我邊看電視邊吃晚餐
我努力盡量(try my best)每天听三小时中文实践來(to)加強(improve)我的聽力，虽然儘管(even though)有时候我只是(just)真的很不想听中文。
→sometimes you "just" can't translate one language to another
我觉得中文很难听得懂，因此(我觉得)我应该試著(try to)听很多很多中文。
我下午一点的時候吃了午饭。
今天我和我爸爸一起吃了午饭。
他吃了沙拉 ，我吃了半个比萨。
他喝了一杯茶，我喝了一杯可乐。Tea~^皿^
我今天下午打算去跑步。我不沒有每天跑步的習慣(routine)，但是不過我喜欢在天气热好的时候去跑步。
→天氣(weather)熱(hot), 天氣(weather)好(nice), 好(good)天氣(weather)
最后，我祝你们复活节快乐！感谢，大家再见！
like your note, your pronunciation is understandable.
good work :)
我的一天 / My Day
大家好！今天我想写一点中文复习来我认识的汉字。我也想朗读我的短文练习我的发音。如果我的短文或者语音有错误，请帮我纠正一下。（这个短文下面有一个录音。）
今天早上我八点起床。起床以后，我从我的卧室去了我们的厨房吃一点东西，平时我早上只吃一碗燕麦粥，因为它不但很好吃，而且很健康。但是，因为我今天早上很饿，不想只吃一碗燕麦粥；所以，我吃两片涂了果酱的面包片
上午十一点钟我去了商店，因为我妈妈对我说“我们在家没有牛奶了，你去商店买牛奶吧！还有，你顺便买一下你晚饭要吃的食品，好吗？”。去商店的路上，我在听中文。我努力每天听三个小时的中文来提高我的中文理解能力，虽然有时候我不想听中文。我觉得中文很难听懂，因此我觉得我应该听很多很多。
下午一点，我吃了午饭。今天我和我爸爸一起吃了午饭。他吃了沙拉 ，我吃了半个比萨。他喝了一杯茶，我喝了一杯可乐。我打算今天下午去跑步。我不会每天都跑步，但是我喜欢天气热的时候去跑步。
最后，祝你们复活节快乐！谢谢大家，再见！
https://www.dropbox.com/s/s5q65cequzghit7/sdg.wav?dl=0
Hello Everyone! Today I want to write a little but of Chinese to review and revise the Chinese characters that I know. I also want to read my article aloud to practise my pronunciation. Please tell me your thoughts about my pronunciation. (The recording is below this text).
This morning I got up at 8am. After getting up, I went from my bedroom to our kitchen to eat some food, I was quite hungry this morning! Normally, I eat a bowl of oatmeal for breakfast as it is not only really tasty, but also quite healthy. However, this morning I didn't want to eat a bowl of oatmeal; that's why I ate two slices of bread. I had some jam on my bread.
At eleven o'clock this morning, I went to the shop because my mother said to me “we don't have any milk left in the house, please go to the shop and buy some. Also, buy whatever you would like to eat for dinner, OK?”. Whilst walking to the shop, I listened to Chinese. I try very hard to listen to 3 hours of Chinese every day to improve my comprehension, although sometimes I just don't want to listen to Chinese. I think that Chinese is very hard to understand, so I think that I should listen to lots and lots of it.
At one o'clock this afternoon, I ate lunch. I ate lunch with my dad today. He ate salad, I ate half pizza. He drank a cup of tea, I drank a cup of Coke. I intend to go for a run this afternoon. I don't run every day, but I like to run when the weather is nice.
Lastly, I would like to wish you all a happy Easter! Thank you everyone, and goodbye!
我的一天 / My Day
大家好！今天我想写一点中文复习我认识的汉字。我也想朗读我的短文实践(检验）我的发音。请你告诉你的想的。（所想¥（这个短文下面有一个录音。）
今天早上我八点起床。起床以后，我从我的卧室去了我们的厨房吃一点东西，我今天早上比较饿！平时我早上吃一碗燕麦粥，因为这个菜不但很好吃，而且一点 （有一点）健康。但是，我今天早上不想吃一碗燕麦粥；所以，我吃两片面包片。面包上面有一点果酱。
上午十一点钟我去了商店，因为我妈妈对我说“我们在家没有牛奶，你去商店买牛奶吧！还有，你买你要吃晚飯 （晚饭要吃）的食品，好吗？”。去商店的时候，我听中文。我努力每天三小时听中文实践（练习 or 加深）我的理解，虽然有时候我只是不想听中文。我觉得中文很难听懂，因此我觉得我应该听很多很多。
下午一点，我吃了午饭。今天我和我爸爸一起吃了午饭。他吃了沙拉 ，我吃了半个比萨。他喝了一杯茶，我喝了一杯可乐。我打算今天下午去跑步。我不每天跑步，但是我喜欢天气热的时候去跑步。
最后，我祝你们复活节快乐！感谢，大家再见！
https://www.dropbox.com/s/s5q65cequzghit7/sdg.wav?dl=0
Hello Everyone! Today I want to write a little but of Chinese to review and revise the Chinese characters that I know. I also want to read my article aloud to practise my pronunciation. Please tell me your thoughts about my pronunciation. (The recording is below this text).
This morning I got up at 8am. After getting up, I went from my bedroom to our kitchen to eat some food, I was quite hungry this morning! Normally, I eat a bowl of oatmeal for breakfast as it is not only really tasty, but also quite healthy. However, this morning I didn't want to eat a bowl of oatmeal; that's why I ate two slices of bread. I had some jam on my bread.
At eleven o'clock this morning, I went to the shop because my mother said to me “we don't have any milk left in the house, please go to the shop and buy some. Also, buy whatever you would like to eat for dinner, OK?”. Whilst walking to the shop, I listened to Chinese. I try very hard to listen to 3 hours of Chinese every day to improve my comprehension, although sometimes I just don't want to listen to Chinese. I think that Chinese is very hard to understand, so I think that I should listen to lots and lots of it.
At one o'clock this afternoon, I ate lunch. I ate lunch with my dad today. He ate salad, I ate half pizza. He drank a cup of tea, I drank a cup of Coke. I intend to go for a run this afternoon. I don't run every day, but I like to run when the weather is nice.
Lastly, I would like to wish you all a happy Easter! Thank you everyone, and goodbye!
我的一天 / My Day
大家好！今天我想写一点中文复习我认识的汉字。我也想朗读我的短文实践复习我的发音。请你告诉你的想的想法。（这个短文下面有一个录音。）
今天早上我八点起床。起床以后，我从我的卧室去了我们的厨房吃一点东西，我今天早上比较饿！平时我早上吃一碗燕麦粥，因为这个菜不但很好吃，而且一点很健康。但是，我今天早上不想吃一碗燕麦粥；所以，我吃两片面包片。面包上面有一点果酱。
上午十一点钟我去了商店，因为我妈妈对我说“我们在家家里没有牛奶了，你去商店买牛奶吧！还有，你买你要吃晚饭的食品，好吗？”。去商店的时候，我听中文。我努力每天三小时听中文实践我的理解练习我的听力，虽然尽管有时候我只是不不是很想听中文。我觉得中文很难听懂，因此我觉得我应该听很多很多。
下午一点，我吃了午饭。今天我和我爸爸一起吃了午饭。他吃了沙拉 ，我吃了半个比萨。他喝了一杯茶，我喝了一杯可乐。我打算今天下午去跑步。我不每天跑步，但是我喜欢天气热的时候去跑步。
最后，我祝你们复活节快乐！感谢，大家再见！
https://www.dropbox.com/s/s5q65cequzghit7/sdg.wav?dl=0
Hello Everyone! Today I want to write a little but of Chinese to review and revise the Chinese characters that I know. I also want to read my article aloud to practise my pronunciation. Please tell me your thoughts about my pronunciation. (The recording is below this text).
This morning I got up at 8am. After getting up, I went from my bedroom to our kitchen to eat some food, I was quite hungry this morning! Normally, I eat a bowl of oatmeal for breakfast as it is not only really tasty, but also quite healthy. However, this morning I didn't want to eat a bowl of oatmeal; that's why I ate two slices of bread. I had some jam on my bread.
At eleven o'clock this morning, I went to the shop because my mother said to me “we don't have any milk left in the house, please go to the shop and buy some. Also, buy whatever you would like to eat for dinner, OK?”. Whilst walking to the shop, I listened to Chinese. I try very hard to listen to 3 hours of Chinese every day to improve my comprehension, although sometimes I just don't want to listen to Chinese. I think that Chinese is very hard to understand, so I think that I should listen to lots and lots of it.
At one o'clock this afternoon, I ate lunch. I ate lunch with my dad today. He ate salad, I ate half pizza. He drank a cup of tea, I drank a cup of Coke. I intend to go for a run this afternoon. I don't run every day, but I like to run when the weather is nice.
Lastly, I would like to wish you all a happy Easter! Thank you everyone, and goodbye!
Some note:
practice=练习 listening comprehension=听力
improve=提高
你的中文很好！ 很棒！ 加油！！继续努力！
我的一天 / My Day
大家好！今天我想写一点中文（来）复习我认识的汉字。我也想朗读我的短文（来）实践我的发音。请你告诉（我）你的想的。（这个短文下面有一个录音。）
今天早上我八点起床。起床以后，我从我的卧室去了我们的厨房吃一点东西，我今天早上比较饿！平时我早上吃（喝）一碗燕麦粥，因为这个菜（粥）不但很好吃，而且一点（比较）健康。但是，我今天早上不想吃一碗燕麦粥；所以，我吃（了）两片面包片。面包上面有一点果酱。
上午十一点钟我去了商店，因为我妈妈对我说“我们在家没有牛奶，你去商店买牛奶吧！还有，你买你要吃晚饭的食品，好吗？”。去商店的时候，我听中文。我努力每天三小时听三小时中文来实践（练习）我的理解，虽然有时候我只是不想听中文。我觉得中文很难听懂，因此我觉得我应该听很多很多（遍）。
下午一点，我吃了午饭。今天我和我爸爸一起吃了午饭。他吃了沙拉 ，我吃了半个比萨。他喝了一杯茶，我喝了一杯可乐。我打算今天下午去跑步。我不每天跑步，但是我喜欢天气热的时候去跑步。
最后，我祝你们复活节快乐！感谢，大家再见！
https://www.dropbox.com/s/s5q65cequzghit7/sdg.wav?dl=0
Hello Everyone! Today I want to write a little but of Chinese to review and revise the Chinese characters that I know. I also want to read my article aloud to practise my pronunciation. Please tell me your thoughts about my pronunciation. (The recording is below this text).
This morning I got up at 8am. After getting up, I went from my bedroom to our kitchen to eat some food, I was quite hungry this morning! Normally, I eat a bowl of oatmeal for breakfast as it is not only really tasty, but also quite healthy. However, this morning I didn't want to eat a bowl of oatmeal; that's why I ate two slices of bread. I had some jam on my bread.
At eleven o'clock this morning, I went to the shop because my mother said to me “we don't have any milk left in the house, please go to the shop and buy some. Also, buy whatever you would like to eat for dinner, OK?”. Whilst walking to the shop, I listened to Chinese. I try very hard to listen to 3 hours of Chinese every day to improve my comprehension, although sometimes I just don't want to listen to Chinese. I think that Chinese is very hard to understand, so I think that I should listen to lots and lots of it.
At one o'clock this afternoon, I ate lunch. I ate lunch with my dad today. He ate salad, I ate half pizza. He drank a cup of tea, I drank a cup of Coke. I intend to go for a run this afternoon. I don't run every day, but I like to run when the weather is nice.
Lastly, I would like to wish you all a happy Easter! Thank you everyone, and goodbye!
