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confusion recently,I am very confused.I have a good friend who acompanied with me through the toughest time.gradually I feel I have falled in love with her ,but i am not sure ,sometimes ,she just likes my sister and I do not have enough time to care for her who live far from me ,I have to focuse on my study to strive for my future ,in the meantime she is getting together with another boy,but i do not think she really loves the boy ,i am just in a mess.
2015年4月15日 14:27
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confusion

recently, I am have been feeling very confused. I have a good friend who accompanied /supported with me through the toughest time. Gradually I began to feel I have fallen in love with her, but i am not sure; sometimes she is just like my sister and I do not have enough time to care for her, since she who lives far from me. I have to focus on my study to strive for my future, but in the meantime she is getting together with another boy.  However I do not think she really loves the boy, I am just in a mess.

 

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2015年4月16日

Confusion

Recently, I am very confused. I have a good friend who acompanied with me through the toughest times. Gradually I feel I have fallen in love with her, but I am not sure. Sometimes she seems just likes my sister and I do not have enough time to care for her, as she who lives far from me. I have to focuse on my studies as I to strive for my future. In the meantime she is getting together with another boy, but i do not think she really loves the boy. I am just in a mess.

 

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2015年4月16日

confusion

Recently, I am very confused. I have a good friend who acompanied with me through the toughest time. Gradually I feel I have fallen in love with her, but I am not sure. Sometimes, she is just like my sister and I do not have enough time to care for her, because she lives so far away from me. I have to focus on my study to strive for my future. Meanwhile she is hanging out with another boy, but I do not think she really loves the boy. I am just in a mess.

2015年4月15日
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