Golden Week

The consecutive days off from the Japan's Golden Week holiday in early May end today.The consecutive holidays in early May called Golden Week in Japan.
Golden week is crowded everywhere; roads, shops and leisure facilities. I don't like a crowded places, so I relaxed at my home.
I'll work hard again from tomorrow.

Golden Week

The consecutive days off end today. The consecutive holidays in early May are called Golden Week in Japan.

During the Ggolden week, it is crowded everywhere: roads, shops and leisure facilities. I don't like a crowded places. So I spent the holiday relaxinged at my home.

I'll start working hard again from tomorrow.

Just in case you might not notice this from the changes I've made, there should be a space after every punctuation marks (such as "," and ".").