I am a student. I like going to the beach

I am / My name is Thị.  I want to improve my English and (i want to) make friends with everyone. (anybody)

I am a student. I like the beach.

I am Thị. I want to improve my English. I want to make be friends with anybody.

I am a student. I like the beach.

I am Thị and i want to improve my english. I want to make become friends with anybody. 

notes:

- capitalise the first letter of the first word of each sentence - example i --> I / hello --> Hello

- capitalise the first letter of your name 

- don't forget full stops at the end of sentences 

- great introduction - Good luck learning English!!