Olga
My night I am happy. Yesterday my best friend became married with her boyfriend of 4 years or maybe 5. It was great, we danced, sang, and have great fun. Now is 7:45, I will try to sleep after a long night of dancing and fun.
2015年6月13日 04:44
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My night

 

I am happy. Yesterday, my best friend became married with her boyfriend of 4years or maybe 5 years. It was great; we danced, sang, and have had great fun. Now it is 7:45, and I will try to sleep after a long night of dancing and fun.

2015年6月13日

My night

I am happy. Yesterday, my best friend became got married with her boyfriend of 4 years, or maybe 5. It was great! We danced, sang and had great fun. Nowit is 7:45 AM, I will try to sleep after a long night of dancing and fun.

 

Well done, just a few minor errors! Keep it up ;-)

2015年7月3日
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