A story of my own

After Laura got divorced, she decided to move away from the house where she lived with her husband.She really needed to have a rest relax, so she went to a small, friendly town which was situated between a forest and a deep lake near the mountains.It was like the paradise, with its wood cottages.It was called: The Dreamers because everyone that went there dreamt about it after visiting it.
Laura's life have had changed completely,she had a healthy life,so she went for a walk every morningand she ran around the forest.However, she had never been inside the deep forest, she thought it was deep enough and she couldn't get out of there.
But this morning was very different, the fog had covered the complete town and it was impossible to see something unless it was so very near.In spite of everything, Laura had breakfast and went for a walk, as usual.
She had been running around the forest but after a few minutes she felt tired and suffocated because of the fog.So she got lost,but fortunately, she found an old cottage,a very neglected one.It denoted that no one had been living there .Later, she heard a piercing woman cry from the akward cottage.She didn't know what to do,she had been feeling so tired before running and now she was confused.However, she decided to have a look.
She passed the path, and she felt the worst smell of her life! It smelled like a death dead dog, and she had a bad feeling so she looked through the window, she froze, she nearly fainted, she had seen an old red-haired man with a romper stained in blood, cutting a woman's body parts and hanging them on a perch.When she saw it, she let out a yell of pain and the man saw her.
Laura ran away as quick as she could and called the police whose fortunately found the old man in the deep forest.
After a week, Laura was called by the court. She agreed so she to be a witnessed about to the crime that this strange man had committed.After that, the man was sent to a nearly prison.
The months passed and Laura returned to her hobbies.AOne friday morning she hadtook a shower,took her briefcase and drove to work, but before going to work, she went to the lake to observed enjoy nature.After  some a few minutes,she saw a shadow between the trees,but when she came out, it had dissappeared. She was stunned.Then she saw the red-haired man,the murderer,running away at full speed:He had her briefcase in his hand!She shouted for help but it was too late,the man turned and shouted at her.

Muy bien!  Tu historia es como la noticia en Nueva York ahora.  Dos asesinos escaparon y ahora uno de ellos murió de un tiro.

A story of my own

After Laura got divorced, she decided to move away from the house where she lived with her husband.She really needed to have a rest, so she went to a small, friendly town which was is situated between a forest and a deep lake near the mountains.It was is like the paradise, with its wood cottages.It was is called: The Dreamers because everyone that who went there dreamt about it after visiting it their visit
Laura's life have had changed completely,she had a healthy life,so she went for a walk every morning and she ran around the forest.However, she had never been inside the deep forest, she thought it was is deep enough and she couldn't get out of from there.
But this that morning was very different, the fog had covered the complete town and it was impossible to see something unless it was so near.In spite of everything, Laura had breakfast and went for a walk, as usual.
She had been was running around the forest but after a few minutes she felt tired and suffocated because of the fog.So she got lost,but fortunately, she found an old cottage,a very neglected one.It denoted looked that no one had been is living there .Later, she heard a piercing woman cry from the that akward cottage.She didn't know what to do,she had been was feeling so tired before after running and now she was confused.However, she decided to have a look into.
She passed the path, and she felt the worst smell of her life! It smelled like a death dog, she had a bad feeling so she looked through the window, she froze, she nearly fainted, she had seen saw an old red-haired man with a romper stained in blood, cutting a woman's body parts and hanging them on a perch.When she saw it, she let out a yell of in pain and the man saw her.
Laura ran away as quick as she could can and called the police whose fortunately found the old man in the deep forest.
After a week, Laura was called by the court. She agreed so as she witnessed about the crime that this strange man had committed.After that, the man was sent to a nearly prison.
The months passed and Laura returned to her hobbies.A friday morning she had a shower,took her case and drove to work, but before going to work, she went to the lake to observed nature's beauty.After some minutes,she saw a shadow between the trees,but when she came out looked towards it, it had dissapeared.She was stunned.Then she saw the red-haired man,the murderer,running away chasing her at full speed:He had her case in his hand!She shouted cried for help but it was too late, the man turned and shotted at her.