A letter of application (please, help me, I have an exam tomorrow and I need to correct this text)
Dear John Cooper,
I am writing in regards to the position offered as a helper in an international sports event. I am particularly interested in this opportunity because I love sports and there is nothing more interesting to me than to take a part in an event where there will be so many professional players of different disciplines.
I am experienced in volunteering at sport championships. I have worked as a part of the Real Madrid security team at a lot of matches during the European Championship and I sold tickets at the 2014 World of Cup in Spain.
I consider myself an expert in football history and am a very passionate fan of the Real Madrid Football Club. Furthermore, I play in the junior football team of this club as a goalkeeper. However, I enjoy watching a wide range of sports, like ping-pong, volleyball, and basketball.
I think I am a very good candidate for this position because I have extensive knowledge of sports competitions and I am willing to learn about any event related to sport.
I hope you will consider my application favourably and if you need more details, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Carmen.
A letter of application (please, help me, I have an exam tomorrow and I need to correct this text)
Dear John Cooper,
Regarding to the offered position of helping in an international sports event. I am particularly interested to this opportunity because I love sports and there is no anything better to me than taking a part in an event where there will be so many professional players of several disciplines.
I am an experienced-or qualified- voluntary in sport championships. I have worked as a part of the Real Madrid security team in a lot of matches of the European Championship and I sold tickets in the World of Cup of Spain 2014.
I consider myself an expert in football history and a very passionate fan of the Real Madrid Football Club. Furthermore, I play in the junior football team of this club as a goalkeeper. However, I enjoy watching a wide range of sports, like ping-pong, volleyball or basketball.
I think I am a very good candidate to this position because I have extensive knowledge of sport competitions and I am willing to learn from any event related with sport.
I hope you will consider my application favourably and if you need more details, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerously,
Carmen.
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A letter of application (please, help me, I have an exam tomorrow and I need to correct this text)
Dear John Cooper,
I am writing in regards to the position offered for a helper in an international sports event. I am particularly interested in this opportunity because I love sports and to me there is nothing better than to take part in an event where there will be so many professional players of varied disciplines.
I am an experienced volunteer in sport championships. I have worked as a part of the Real Madrid security team in numerous European Championship matches as well as having sold tickets duringl the 2014 world cup.
I consider myself an expert in football history and a very passionate fan of the Real Madrid Football Club. Furthermore, I play in the junior football team of this club as a goalkeeper. However, I enjoy watching a wide range of sports, such as ping-pong, volleyball and basketball.
I think I am a qualified candidate to fulfill this position because I have extensive knowledge of sport competitions and am willing to learn from any event related to sports.
I hope you will consider my application favourably and if you need more details, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Carmen.