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Vacation Are these sentences correct? «Hello Wendy, Thank you for letting me know. I hope you will enjoy your vacation, which I'm sure is well deserved !»
2015年7月31日 01:10
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Vacation

Are these sentences correct?

«Hello Wendy,

Thank you for letting me know. I hope you will enjoy your vacation, which I'm sure is well deserved!»

 

<em>[Your sentences are correct.  I think the (!) is good if you wanted to add emphasis.  Only one thing - there is no space before the (!), or any other punctuation, including periods and commas.]</em>

2015年7月31日

Vacation

Are these sentences correct?

«Hello Wendy,

Thank you for letting me know. I hope you will enjoy your vacation, which I'm sure is well deserved.»

 

I agree that you could use a period instead of an exclamation mark at the end of the last sentece. I would also omit 'will', since it sound more natural without it. Usually when we are giving well-wishes we do so in the present tense, so we would say "I hope you have a great day" or "I hope you enjoy the party" or "I hope you have a good weekend".

2015年7月31日
Actually, yes they are correct. The only thing I would suggest is at the end of the second sentence use a period, instead of an exclamation point.
2015年7月31日
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