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My friend My friend name is xiao lei . He is very smart .xiao lei is always ready to help me .I am thanks to him .I hope happy to him every day .I can study hard to help others an well as him .
2015年8月2日 10:06
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My friend

My friend's name is Xiao Lei. He is very smart. Xiao Lei is always ready to help me. (better: Xiao Lei is always <em>willing</em> to help me) I am thanks grateful to him for his help. I hope May he be happy to him every day. I can want to study hard to so I can help others an as well as him.


Very good writing overall. Don't forget to capitalize the first letter of proper nouns (your friend's name), and notice there shouldn't be a space before periods.

2015年8月2日
You and Xiao are very friendly persons.
2015年8月2日
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