Carmen G.F
It was not just a holiday, it changed my life. I was twenty five years old, my office mate, a handsome and charming guy asked me to enjoy with him the next holiday in ibiza, Ibiza is a small Spanish island on the Mediterranean where the sea is whole blue. My office mate was also a good friend. I liked the idea and answered him yes. He took care of everything, booking flight and hotel. When we arrived to Ibiza everything was marvelous and I fell more and more in love. A night while we was walking on the beach he proposed to me. Eight month later we got married.
2015年9月3日 19:21
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It was not just a holiday, it changed my life.

 

I was twenty five years old, and my office mate, a handsome and charming guy, asked me to enjoy with him the next holiday in ibiza., Ibiza is a small Spanish island on the Mediterranean where the whole sea is whole blue. My office mate was also a good friend. I liked the idea and answered him yes. He took care of everything, booking the flight and the hotel. When we arrived to Ibiza everything was marvelous and I fell more and more in love. A night, while we were was walking on the beach, he proposed to me. Eight month later we got married.

2015年9月4日
Wow, Congratulations!
2015年9月4日
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2015年9月4日
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