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it is written well My name is Jesus, and living in Mexico. Im have 30 years old. I like practice exersice and sport.
2015年9月4日 22:09
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It is well written.

My name is Jesus, and I  live in Mexico.
Im am 30 years old and I like exercising and sport.

2015年9月4日

It is written well?

My name is Jesus, and I am living in Mexico.
I'm have 30 years old. I like practice to exersice and play sports.

2015年9月5日

it is written well (Either "It is well written" or "Is it well written?")

My name is Jesus, and (I am living/I live) in Mexico. ("I am living" sounds more temporary, "I live" suggests a long period of time and perhaps that you are from Mexico.)


I'm have 30 years old. I like practice to exersice and play sports.

2015年9月5日
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