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Raising a pet
I like animals, especially dogs, but I can't raise one. I'm not afford to feed a pet. There are some cats and dogs in my neighborhood and I usually play with them when I go for a walk. I hope I will raise one some day.
2015年12月1日 16:09
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Hello Chul! ^^
Good job on your essay! Very minimal mistakes. Keep it up! ^^
~Charlie
I like animals, especially dogs, but I can't raise one. I'm not afford to feed a pet.
>> I like animals especially dogs but I can't afford to raise one.
There are some cats and dogs in my neighborhood and I usually play with them when I go for a walk. I hope I will raise one some day.
>> There are some cats and dogs around my neighborhood and I usually play with them whenever I go for a walk. I hope I can raise one someday.
2015年12月2日
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