Awful vacation

I want to tell you a story what that I have heard on in my last English lesson about an awful vacation on in Ibiza. You may wonder - How could it be? And after you reading read (or, "after reading it") it you will understand :D So let's begin.
An old married couple of old people wanted to feel something new on their vacation, so they choose chose to take a trip to Ibiza. They was were on that island in 1960 and there were it was quiet and peaceful. A The couple expected took to take a rest and relax there. So they bought (what a lucky!) cheap fly airline tickets and started to packed their suitcases. But Ibiza is a good choice when you're 17th 17, not 70th 70! So when they landing there they was were shocked how Ibiza changed! The deserted beaches earlier was were with a flooded of with tourists. The hotel where they had booked the apartment was in the part of the city where there were a lot of bars. The music was played until 5 a.m. and they couldn't sleep at night. Also they couldn't sleep in the day-time because there it was too hot and they just boiling boiled in the room. All 2 weeks they just want to go back home. And after they arrived home they decided to spend all their vacations at home =)
Hope you enjoy the story ^^
Thanx for reading xO

Awful Vacation

I want to tell you a story what that I have heard on at my last English lesson about an awful vacation on Ibiza. You may wonder - How could it be? And after you reading it you will understand :D So let's begin.
An old married couple of old people wanted to feel experience something new on their vacation, so they choose to take a trip to Ibiza. They were on that island in 1960 and it was quiet and peaceful. The couple expected took a to rest and relax there. So they bought (what a lucky luck!) cheap fly plane tickets and started to packed their suitcases. But Ibiza is a good choice when you're 17th, not 70th! So when they landed there they were shocked by how Ibiza had changed! The deserted beaches from before earlier was with a were now flooded with of tourists. The hotel where they had booked the apartment was in the part of the city where there were lots of bars. The music was played untill 5 a.m. and they couldn't sleep at night. Also they couldn't sleep in the daytime because it was too hot and they were just boiling in the room. All two weeks they just wanted to be back home. And after arriving they decided spend all their vacations at home =)
Hope you enjoyed the story ^^
Thanks for reading xO

An Awful Vacation

I want to tell you the story of what I heard in my last English lesson about an awful vacation in Ibiza. You may wonder - How could it be? And after you reading it you will understand :D So let's begin.
An elderly married couple wanted to feel something new on their vacation, so they choose to take a trip to Ibiza. They were on that island in 1960 and it was quiet and peaceful. The couple expected to take a rest and relax there. So they bought (what luck!) cheap flights and started to pack* their suitcases. But Ibiza is a good choice when you're 17, not 70! So when they landed there they were shocked how Ibiza had changed! The once deserted beaches were now flooded with tourists. The hotel where they had booked the apartment was in the part of the city where there were lots of bars. The music played until 5 a.m. and they couldn't sleep at night. Also they couldn't sleep during the day because it was too hot and they just boiled in their room. For all their 2 weeks they just wanted to go back home. And after they did, they decided to spend all their vacations at home =)
Hope you enjoyed the story ^^
Thankey for reading xO

*to + infinitive (always)

Very well written!