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The way to the Gym. Hello everybody. Please, help me to make my English better. Thanks for your correction and many thanks if you show me how to write this text a little bit better and more English. Three times a week I wake up at 6 a.m and go to the gym. Today one of that days. A day is very log if you wake up early. I still don't know I like to train or no, my training always like a dream. I think it's because I have to wake up too early. So, today I woke up and went to the gym like every Monday. When I was driving, I passed by my office. It's a cross between the main street and the secondary road. I drive by the secondary street. The traffic lights was red I and stopped. In 20 seconds the traffic lights became green and I began to move. But something was wrong, I feel it. I started to creep and I was looking to the left. I didn't know why I do it, I just obeyed the inner voice. In a second a car rushed through my way close to my fender, it was very close. I even didn't have any time to recognize the car, I was something silver. The inner voice kept silent and I went on my movement. The moral of the story is "Listen yourself" ;)
2016年11月28日 15:04
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The way to the Gym.

Hello everybody.
Please, help me to make my English better. Thanks for your correction and many thanks if you show me how to write this text a little bit better and more English.

Three times a week I wake up at 6 a.m and go to the gym. Today one of that those days. A day is very long if you wake up early. I still don't know if I like to train or not, my training is always like a dream. I think it's because I have to wake up too early.

So, today I woke up and went to the gym like every Monday. When I was driving, I passed by my office. It's a cross between the main street and the secondary road. I drive by the secondary street. The traffic lights was red I and I stopped. In 20 seconds the traffic lights became green and I began to move. But something was wrong, I feel felt it. I started to creep and I was looking to the left. I didn't know why I do did it, I just obeyed the inner voice. In a second a car rushed through my way close to my fender, it was very close. I didn´t even didn't have any time to recognize the car, I it was something silver. The inner voice kept silent and I went on my movement.

The moral of the story is "Listen yourself" ;)


Very well done! keep studying hard. just check some details

2016年11月28日
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