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Dahlia
Diary Entry for February 1st
Today，it's the turn for our family to invite guests. We decide to invite them to have a hot pot. There's a popular hot pot buffet restaurant around our house. This buffet restaurant not only has a delicious taste，but also has a cheap price. Everyone just needs to pay for 40 RMB，the price includes varieties of meat，vegetables，fruits and drinks.
I think many relatives unite together to have a hot pot can stimulate appetite. Since we can chat with each other while eating. It's very happy to have lunch in such a harmonious atmosphere！
2017年2月1日 02:14
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Diary Entry for February 1st
Today，it's our family's turn to invite guests. We decided to invite them over for a hot pot. There's a popular hot pot buffet restaurant near our house. This buffet-style restaurant not only has cheap food, but it's also delicious!. Everyone just needs to pay 40 RMB - the price includes different varieties of meat，vegetables，fruits and drinks.I think many relatives united together to have a hot pot can stimulate appetite, since we can chat with each other while eating. It's wonderful to have lunch in such a harmonious atmosphere！
2017年2月1日
Diary Entry for February 1st
Today，it's the our family's turn for our family to invite guests. We decided to invite them to have a hot pot. There's a popular hot pot buffet restaurant around our house. This buffet restaurant not only has a delicious taste，but it also has a cheap price. Everyone just needs to pay for 40 RMB，and the price includes varieties of meat，vegetables，fruits, (Optional comma, but it's best to include it.) and drinks.I think many relatives who unite together to have a hot pot can stimulate appetites. (<-- 这句话听上去比较奇怪。你可以用中文写一遍吗？) Since we can chat with each other while eating, it's very creates a very happy moment to have lunch in such a harmonious atmosphere！
Dahlia，写得不错。有一些句子好像是直接重中文翻译成英文，对不对？麻烦你把第二段用中文写一遍，我可以帮你改的跟标准。
2017年2月1日
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