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Every year’s spring outing The day after tomorrom, we all students which are studying in the same grade are going to have a spring outing.It makes me realize the spring outing last year. It was a month later than this time.And my classmates havent been divided to different classes.Although I had only some friends in the class,the others were not familiar,I still quite looked forward to the trip.We went to a place where there is full of flowers.It is a attraction for adults,but is extremely boring for us.On arriving there,many of my classmates explained.However,even through they said so,they still begun to take selfies together.Some of them had only a bowing acquaintance with each other,but they also take a picture together.I dont know if this is common in other countries,or I think so just because I am introverted. Then we had a lunch together in a park.Because the price of food there is expensive,we took it from our home.And in the park,we met a group of pupils which were from other city,who were having a spring outing that day,too.Maybe we were from different citys,so our character was extremely different.They were so outgoing and enthusiastic that taking with them was absolutely a joy.Other things I cant remember.But the most delighted time isn't this time.That is when I was a ninth grades student who were outing and lively and was on good terms with a lot of my classmates.Until now,two years later,we were still hanging out together whenever we had leisure time.As I was upset or was under stress of stud, cant take a breath,I will fill with energy again after having fun with them.From my experience,I can easily draw the conclusion that whether a spring trip is fun depends who you enjoy it with. Thank you for correcting my writing.

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Every year’s spring outing (The Annual Spring Outing)

The day after tomorrow, we all the students which are studying in the same grade (as I) are going to have a spring outing.It makes me realize remember the spring outing last year.
It was a month later than this time.And my classmates haven't been divided into different classes.(If you meant last year's outing: "And my classmates hadn't been divided...") Although I had only some friends in the class,the others were not familiar,I still quite looked forward to the trip.We went to a place where there isthat was full of flowers.It is an attraction for adults,but iswas extremely boring for us.On arriving there,many of my classmates explained/said this.However,even through they said so,they still begunbegan to take selfies together.Some of them had only a bowing acquaintance with each other,but they also take still took a picture together.I don't know if this is common in other countries,or I think sothis is strange just because I am introverted.  (It is common in other countries and a little weird.  People just like taking pictures of things and showing them off.)
Then we had a lunch together in a park.Because the price of food there iswas expensive,we took itfood from our home. ("was", still past tense, last year's outing.  "we brought food from home" sounds better.  Could also say "we brought food from our homes" but that's slightly more awkward.) And in the park,we met a group of pupils which were from another city, who were having a spring outing that day,too.Maybe we were from different cities,so our character was extremely different.They were so outgoing and enthusiastic that talking with them was absolutely a joy.Other things I cant remember.But the most delightedful time isn't thiswasn't that time.That is It was when I was a ninth grades student who waswere outingoutgoing(social?) and lively and was on good terms with a lot of my classmates.
(A bit too long.  The rest in comment.)

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