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Writing task 2 On nowadays, with the develop of the technology, our living level has been greatly improved. While people are becoming more and more unhealthy. To deal with this problem, some people suggest that , in order to improve public health ,it is the best method for the government to prepare more sports facilities for the civilizations. But there are others who do not believe this will be an effective measure, and they cherished on other methods instead. For sure, the sports facilities may contribute to the health of civilizations , because it will be more convenient for people who want to do daily exercise . Also, there will be a lot of waste and inefficiency by selling too much sports machines to individuals , so this way is less waste, more effective and more healthier. What's more , all the tax payers could gain more benefits from this government activity. In my opinion, other measures should be put into actions simultaneously. For example, by allocating more public transportations or riding bicycles instead of driving their own cars, organizing more public games or races, spending more budgets on organic food restaurants and so on. In conclusion, there are so many ways to help improving public health, other than one measure only.
2017年3月11日 10:37
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Writing task 2

On Nowadays, with the develop of the technology, our living level standard of living has been greatly improved. While However, people are becoming more and more unhealthy. To deal with this problem, some people suggest that  in order to improve public health it is the best method for the government to should make prepare more sports facilities available for the civilizations public. But there are others who do not believe this will be an effective measure, and they cherished on other methods instead believe that other methods would be better. 

For sure Certainly, the more sports facilities may contribute to the health of civilizations the public, because it will be more convenient for those people who want to do daily more exercise . Also, there will be a lot of waste and inefficiency by selling too much sports machines to individuals , so this way is less waste, more effective and more healthier it is wasteful to sell exercise machines to individuals, especially as many people will most likely not use them. So, more sports facilities is less wasteful, more effective, and oveall healthier for the public.  What's more Furthermore, all the tax payers could gain more greater benefits from this government activity expenditure.

In my opinion, other measures should be put into action simultaneously. For example, by allocating facilitating better more public transportations or riding bicycles encouraging people to ride their bicycles instead of driving their own cars, organizing more public games or races, spending more budgets on organic food restaurants and so on.

In conclusion, there are so many ways to help improving public health, other than through the adoption of a single one measure only.

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