Can you correct my mistakes, please?
Your English teacher has asked you to write a story. Your story must begin with this sentence:
I had never expected to see her again.
I had never expected to see her again. It had been a long time since I saw her for the last time. She had been studying with me at the school and we were good friends. However, the last year of school she went to live with your father to other country. When I known that notice I felt myself very sad because I spent a lot of time with Maria at the school. She was my best friend and she helped me to pass a lot of subjects that for me it was very difficult to pass such as maths.
In spite of this, we send ourselves letters for several years. She had told me that she going to continue living in Londres and that I had started to study in a well-known university called Cambridge University.
Then, we stopped sending ourselves letters and I did't know nothing about my old friend of school.
Recently, she came to visit me and I receive a great surprise. I don’t believe it yet!
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Can you correct my mistakes, please?
Your English teacher has asked you to write a story. Your story must begin with this sentence:I had never expected to see her again.
I had never expected to see her again. It had been a long time since I saw her for the last time. She had been studying with me at the school We went to school together and we were good friends. However, in the last year of our school she moved to another country with your her father. When I found out about it I was very sad because I spent a lot of time with Maria at the school. She was my best friend and she helped me to pass a lot of subjects that were very difficult for me to pass such as Math.
In spite of this, we kept sending letters to each other for several years. She wrote that she would be living in London and she had started studying in a well-known university called Cambridge University.
Then, we stopped sending ourselves letters and I knew nothing about my old friend from school.
Recently, she came to visit me which came as such a surprise to me. I don’t believe it yet!
ENicely and emotionally written.
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